From the Bark of the Paper Birch Tree the Menomini Crafted a Canoe About Twenty Feet Long and Two Feet Wide, With Small Ribs and Rails of Cedar

Question: From the bark of the paper birch tree the Menomini crafted a canoe about twenty feet long and two feet wide, with small ribs and rails of cedar, which could carry four persons or eight hundred pounds of baggage so light that a person could easily portage it around impeding rapids.

(A) baggage so light
(B) baggage being so light
(C) baggage, yet being so light
(D) baggage, and so light
(E) baggage yet was so light

“From the bark of the paper birch tree the Menomini crafted a canoe about twenty feet long and two feet wide, with small ribs and rails of cedar” - is a GMAT sentence correction question. These types of questions contain grammatical errors in the underlined sentence and we have to choose the correct statement from the options. GMAT sentence correction is a part of GMAT verbal.

Answer: E
Explanation:

The given sentence correction question is tested by the given-below rules:

• Parallelism
• Comparison of two elements
• Modifiers

From the bark of the paper birch tree the Menomini crafted a canoe about twenty feet long and two feet wide, with small ribs and rails of cedar, which could carry four persons or eight hundred pounds of baggage so light that a person could easily portage it around impeding rapids.

(A) The original sentence intends to contrast two qualities of the canoe but fails to try and do so using 'so'. Hence (A) is wrong.
(B) This statement is unnecessarily wordy - 'being' isn't required during this case.
(C) "being" is wrong here. But since there is a comma after "baggage", It is literally OK from a meaning perspective, everything after "baggage" is bearing on "canoe", which is nice. Nonetheless, "being" isn't needed.
(D) The "comma + and" is wrong here. If we're visiting have a comma + and, I believe we'd like a clause. But we do not have a verb after the comma + and.
(E) There's nothing clearly wrong with this sentence, and it is the only other answer choice except for (C) and (D) that conveys the proper meaning by having the modifier after "baggage" discuss with "canoe." This can be the right option.

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